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The Lost Alleys ** June 18, 2800 **
 * In the beginning, the world was in World War Three, the Americans decided not to fight but instead watch the catastrophic events. When the Atom Bombs was launched over to them they did not know what to do. So they gunned it down in the middle of the Atlantic Sea. But that did not stop the war. The war had lasted over 100 years and over that time from driving everywhere, the pollution caused the sun to fade away form the world. A legend says that in New USA(New USA is suppose to be a better place in the chaos around the globe) there are alley ways but only the ones with great courage can enter. The greatest, most advanced warriors have tried but have never been seen again. **


 * June 16, 2809 **
 * One night, when everyone was asleep and nothing dared to move in the Alley Way of Forgotten Dreams, the Alley Way of Forgotten Dreams is slowly awaking from a great slumber. One girl, who is 5 foot 3 inches, had dark black hair that shimmers in the pale moon light, and her skin is a misty white from the moon, her hoodie with the hood pulled up and her black leather jeans starting to fade in the knees from crawling around, (She had to wear a rebriever so that she could breathe without problems) was wondering on the edge of New USA. A girl, named Felicia, wanted to get out of the pollution from the gas and she went into the Alley Way of Forgotten Dreams, not knowing what was ahead. She walked where no one else has walked before. **
 * “Well, well, well? Who do we have hear?” a mysterious thing hissed from the shadows. **
 * “My name is Fe…Felicia,” she said trying to stay brave. **
 * The mysterious thing came out of the shadows into the Alley Way of Forgotten Dreams with the pale moon trying to shine through the pollution above, onto its scales. The thing looked like a man but with teal scales on its body, and black, shaggy hair, and a blue snake tail instead of legs. Its dark blue, ocean snake eyes that almost put Felicia in a trance, darted everywhere. **
 * “Well, why are you, Felicia, wondering around in the Alley Way of Forgotten Dreams?” it hissed. **
 * “So that is the name of this place,” Felicia said trying to sound as brave as a fourteen year-old could. **
 * “Why is it that you are here anyway?” it tried to say as quietly as possible, still with its eyes bolting everywhere. **
 * “Question and answer, why did you get quiet all of a sudden? I am here because I am trying to be brave, plus I am trying to get away from the pollution,” she says with power behind her voice. **
 * “To answer your question, it was because I did not want to stir the others.” **
 * “Oh,” she says with fear behind her voice.” But, I saw other alley ways out there that looked like this one. So, are there more or different things like you, throughout the alleys?” Felicia questioned. **
 * “Yes,” is what he said, but instead of his eyes bolting everywhere, it looked at her with those snake eyes. **
 * Felicia was thinking to her self, Oh no, will I have to fend for myself because I am not, going back out there in the pollution or will I be sending my self to die?. **
 * “I actually stopped to talk to you, ah,” he says shocked. “I forgot to tell you my name, it is Xhoran (X-Hor-An). I am a male not a female, at least I think I am?” He says chasing his tail in a circle. **
 * Felicia starts laughing and then quiets down soon after. **
 * “Oh so your name fits perfectly, weird and strange,” Felicia says. **
 * “Well I need to get moving if I hope to make the deadline!” he says rushed. **
 * “Deadline?” she says questionably. **
 * “Yes, I have to awaken all of the alleys by the 5th of January, 2810. If I fail to awaken all 103 alley’s the ensuing could tear apart the world, plunging it into utter chaos,” he warns. **
 * “So are you saying that you want me to defeat over 100 people in order to stop a war, in six months, to make the world not plunging into chaos?” as if she heard wrong. **
 * “Yes,” that is all he annouces again. **
 * “Well I can’t do this alone or while wearing this,” she says gesturing to her hoodie and leather jeans. “But, find me the right armor and weapons and I will come.” **
 * “That is okay. I know where armor and weapons are,” he says reassuring her. **
 * “Well than what are we still doing here? Take me, please.” she says. **
 * “Then let us go!” he says. **
 * As they leave and go in between two buildings, Felicia sees a pair of eyes bolt away from view. Hmm... I wonder if that is my friend or my enemy, Felicia pondered to herself. She didn’t even realize that Xhoran had stopped, so she stepped on his tail accidentally?” **
 * “Ow!” He whispers back to her. “We are being followed,” Xhoran says. **
 * He flipped around making his scales tried to shimmer from the moonlight as he pushes Felicia behind him, guarding her like a precious item. **
 * “So you want to protect an outsider when you can’t even protect your family!” A mysterious voice yells from the dark shadows from the building all around them. **
 * “Back off sis you need to go back to sixty eight not one,” Xhoran shouts at the shadows. **
 * Suddenly a scorpion tail shoots out of the darkness headed straight towards Xhoran and Felicia. Xhoran grabs the tail and flings what ever was on the other side out of the shadows. Felicia sees the beast fly over her head, she looked at it and saw that it looked like a purple skinned women, four arms, legs sticking out of her and a scorpion tail coming out of her butt, practically. She also had armour that was adjusted to fit her perfectly with a black coating to make her look like a giant, iron, black and purple, scorpion. Then her head slams into the concrete and that is a very hard landing. **
 * “Hurry she will only be out for a moment, but once she has regained balance we will not be so lucky.” Xhoran says slithering as fast as he can with Felicia towards the forgery and between to old homes. **
 * “Wow! Nice sibling,” Felicia says running behind Xhoran. **
 * “Nice siblings, plural,” Xhoran says in front of her. **
 * “Wait there is more of you things!” Felicia says as Xhoran stops. **
 * “Yes, Five brothers and Sisters. We are going to see Jeklen (zz-ek-lenh) who has bear claws, is taller than six foot, and super fury everywhere. He had white fur,but now it is a dark brown and black because of working in the forge,” Xhoran says trying to explain with shortness of breath. **
 * From a distance away, Felicia sees smoke coming from somewhere in front of them. Then suddenly they hear an ear-piercing scream coming from the distance as dawn is afoot. “Sunrise, aw it use to be so beautiful but at least you can still see it, wait isn’t it painful for you people because you are not used to sunlight?” She asks Xhoran **
 * “No, but to the others it does.” **
 * “Oh” that was all she could think of was oh. **
 * This should get interesting, no one but the people of old and some who have been exposed to harsh radiation like me and my brothers plus sisters.’ **
 * “Why, what is in Alley Zero,” **
 * “The Forge of Nothing, the greatest forge known to every one and known to no one. Here let’s just stay… here...for now… I am exhausted,” Xhoran says with shortness of breath. **
 * Felicia didn’t realize it, but she had been running that entire time, and had a conversation with Xhoran. Xhoran gets up from the rock which he was on, and slithers up to Felicia. **
 * “Lift up your pant leg,” Xhoran says calmly. **
 * “Why?” Felicia asked **
 * “Just do it!!” Xhoran yells at her. **
 * “Sorry!” Felicia yells back at him, she pulls up her pant leg. Underneath there is fur that is gold and black just like a cheetah. **
 * “Oh no!” Xhoran says under his breath. **
 * “What is it?” Felicia questions. **
 * “Nothing,” Xhoran lies. **
 * “Lets go then,” she says wondering what he had seen. **